Bug 1218858 - Update tracking protection language in about:privatebrowsing. r=mfinkle
authorMargaret Leibovic <margaret.leibovic@gmail.com>
Wed, 28 Oct 2015 11:53:49 -0400
changeset 305198 0160ff5dfde28032fb5f752d81e72e1ffc964271
parent 305197 4b2824d5f14597f28b56f15713f93fd79beaedab
child 305199 c85260a0fcf3018b789037a48ec7228a43ff24b2
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Bug 1218858 - Update tracking protection language in about:privatebrowsing. r=mfinkle
mobile/android/chrome/content/aboutPrivateBrowsing.xhtml
mobile/android/locales/en-US/chrome/aboutPrivateBrowsing.dtd
--- a/mobile/android/chrome/content/aboutPrivateBrowsing.xhtml
+++ b/mobile/android/chrome/content/aboutPrivateBrowsing.xhtml
@@ -27,17 +27,17 @@
   <body class="private">
     <img class="showPrivate masq" src="chrome://browser/skin/images/privatebrowsing-mask-and-shield.svg" />
     <img class="showNormal masq" src="chrome://browser/skin/images/privatebrowsing-mask.png" />
 
     <h1 class="showPrivate">&privatebrowsingpage.title;<br />&privatebrowsingpage.title.private;</h1>
     <h1 class="showNormal">&privatebrowsingpage.title.normal1;</h1>
 
     <div class="contentSection">
-      <p class="showPrivate">&privatebrowsingpage.description.private4;</p>
+      <p class="showPrivate">&privatebrowsingpage.description.trackingProtection;<br /><br />&privatebrowsingpage.description.privateDetails;</p>
       <p class="showNormal">&privatebrowsingpage.description.normal2;</p>
 
       <p class="showPrivate"><a href="https://support.mozilla.org/kb/private-browsing-firefox-android">&privatebrowsingpage.link.private;</a></p>
       <p class="showNormal"><a href="#" id="newPrivateTabLink">&privatebrowsingpage.link.normal;</a></p>
     </div>
 
   </body>
 </html>
--- a/mobile/android/locales/en-US/chrome/aboutPrivateBrowsing.dtd
+++ b/mobile/android/locales/en-US/chrome/aboutPrivateBrowsing.dtd
@@ -8,16 +8,18 @@
                         is used as a title, with the privatebrowsingpage.title string preceding it but on a separate line.
                         So the final line will say "Private Browsing + Tracking Protection". -->
 <!ENTITY privatebrowsingpage.title.private "+ Tracking Protection">
 <!-- Localization note (privatebrowsingpage.title.normal1): "Private Browsing"
      is capitalized in English to be consistent with our existing uses of the
      term. -->
 <!ENTITY privatebrowsingpage.title.normal1 "You are not in Private Browsing">
 
-<!ENTITY privatebrowsingpage.description.private4 "&brandShortName; will prevent you from being tracked and won't remember any history, but downloaded files and new bookmarks will still be saved to your device.">
+<!ENTITY privatebrowsingpage.description.trackingProtection "&brandShortName; blocks parts of the pages that may track your browsing activity.">
+<!ENTITY privatebrowsingpage.description.privateDetails "We won't remember any history, but downloaded files and new bookmarks will still be saved to your device.">
+
 <!-- Localization note (privatebrowsingpage.description.normal2): "Private
      Browsing is capitalized in English to be consistent with our existing uses
      of the term. -->
 <!ENTITY privatebrowsingpage.description.normal2 "In Private Browsing, we won't keep any of your browsing history or cookies. Bookmarks you add and files you download will still be saved on your device.">
 
 <!ENTITY privatebrowsingpage.link.private "Want to learn more?">
 <!ENTITY privatebrowsingpage.link.normal "Open a new private tab">