better variants of the intro texts for index and about pages
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Wed, 31 Oct 2007 01:58:49 +0000
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better variants of the intro texts for index and about pages
src/about.en.html
src/index.en.html
--- a/src/about.en.html
+++ b/src/about.en.html
@@ -12,33 +12,39 @@
 <link rel="up" href="./" title="Home">
 
 <title>About SeaMonkey</title>
 </head>
 <body>
 <h1>About SeaMonkey</h1>
 
 <p>
-The SeaMonkey project is a community effort to develop and deliver new, updated
-releases of the integrated internet software suite previously made popular by
-Netscape and Mozilla. The SeaMonkey suite includes an Internet browser, email
-&amp; newsgroup client, HTML editor, IRC chat and web development tools all in
-one single application. With our collection of great software, we're trying to
-appeal advanced users and web developers as well as corporate users.
+The SeaMonkey project is a community effort to develop the SeaMonkey
+all-in-one internet application suite.
+Such a software suite was previously made popular by Netscape and Mozilla,
+and the SeaMonkey project continues to develop and deliver high-quality updates
+as well as new features and improvements to this concept. Containing an
+Internet browser, email &amp; newsgroup client, HTML editor, IRC chat and web
+development tools, SeaMonkey is sure to appeal to advanced users, web
+developers and corporate users.
 </p>
 
 <p>
 <a href="http://www.mozilla.org/" class="mozillapower"><img
  src="/images/powered_by_mozilla_small.png" height="31" width="122"
  alt="powered by Mozilla"></a>
-SeaMonkey is legally backed by the
-<a href="http://www.mozilla.org/foundation/">Mozilla Foundation</a> and using
-the same <a href="http://www.mozilla.org/">Mozilla</a> source code that make
-a number of sibling projects like Firefox and Thunderbird vastly successful,
-and powers lots of other great software like Sunbird, Camino, Songbird or Miro.
+SeaMonkey is built on the open source
+<a href="http://www.mozilla.org/">Mozilla</a> Gecko engine, the same code which
+underlies the highly successful siblings Firefox and Thunderbird, as well as
+other projects such as Sunbird, Camino, Songbird and Miro.
+SeaMonkey benefits from the cross-fertilization with these other projects, by
+gaining (and contributing) new features and the ongoing security updates which
+are a modern necessity.
+The <a href="http://www.mozilla.org/foundation/">Mozilla Foundation</a>
+provides hosting and legal backing for the SeaMonkey Project.
 </p>
 
 <h2 id="org">Organization</h2>
 
 <h3 id="council">SeaMonkey Council</h3>
 
 <p>The SeaMonkey Council is the team responsible for project and release
 management, and can be contacted via the email address
--- a/src/index.en.html
+++ b/src/index.en.html
@@ -59,33 +59,34 @@
   <!--
   highlightDownload("download");
   // -->
 </script>
 
 <h1>The SeaMonkey<sup>&reg;</sup> Project</h1>
 
 <p>
-The SeaMonkey project is a community effort to develop and deliver new, updated
-releases of the integrated internet software suite previously made popular by
-Netscape and Mozilla. The SeaMonkey suite includes an Internet browser, email
-&amp; newsgroup client, HTML editor, IRC chat and web development tools all in
-one single application. With our collection of great software, we're trying to
-appeal advanced users and web developers as well as corporate users.
+The SeaMonkey project is a community effort to develop the SeaMonkey
+all-in-one internet application suite (see below).
+Such a software suite was previously made popular by Netscape and Mozilla,
+and the SeaMonkey project continues to develop and deliver high-quality updates
+to this concept. Containing an Internet browser, email &amp; newsgroup client,
+HTML editor, IRC chat and web development tools, SeaMonkey is sure to appeal to
+advanced users, web developers and corporate users.
 </p>
 
 <p>
 <a href="http://www.mozilla.org/" class="mozillapower"><img
  src="/images/powered_by_mozilla_small.png" height="31" width="122"
  alt="powered by Mozilla"></a>
-SeaMonkey is legally backed by the
-<a href="http://www.mozilla.org/foundation/">Mozilla Foundation</a> and using
-the same <a href="http://www.mozilla.org/">Mozilla</a> source code that make
-a number of sibling projects like Firefox and Thunderbird vastly successful,
-and powers lots of other great software like Sunbird, Camino, Songbird or Miro.
+Under the hood, SeaMonkey uses much of the same
+<a href="http://www.mozilla.org/">Mozilla</a> source code which powers such
+successful siblings as Firefox, Thunderbird, Camino, Sunbird and Miro.
+Legal backing is provided by the
+<a href="http://www.mozilla.org/foundation/">Mozilla Foundation</a>.
 </p>
 
 <h2><a href="news">Project News</a></h2>
 
 <h4>October 19th, 2007</h4>
 <p><strong>SeaMonkey 1.1.5 Released</strong></p>
 
 <p>